the render imo doesn't fit the smooth background... try and find a crisp stock of a real person and putit in there i think it would look really nice if there was a really sharp object in the middle instead of the soft anime dood.
hmm Ive see your other works and for some reason these two just seem ah off I would say. The top one I can somewhat say that the render doesn't feel right. But yet it still flows and looks alright. Its like the render is blocking the light, looking away from it. Pretty cool aspect. The 2nd one idk what to say about it. Just doesn't sit right. hmm
I tried working with the first one to make it better, I changed the stock etc and I came out with what I have now. I am either too tired or I just don't care anymore. djgfna'dsgf dgfd gsfd gfds g ------ homework.
I realized that... Thats why I stated I hear ya. Then afterward stated gl with them as in when ur not so tired u know what nvm...
i think the render is a lil dark and sorta kills the tag maybe add some lighting on the actual render i think it may look much better.
The render being so dark has a reason, I was trying to created a noteful contrast between the focal and the background.
