First thing I noticed that was a lil off were those 2 bars (top left). They cut off the "Me" in "Fear Me". The white in the three corners and the random dots hmm idk... ever try it with a border? Not a fan or borders? Other then that it looks good. If you look at as a whole what I pointed out isn't even noticeable but when u get up close and personal they stick out more. Which isn't necessarily bad.
text and the boxes behind it was what throws me off the most, otherwise its an interesting style but i find it nice, nothing basic stands out as an issue ^_^
for me the white on the outside... only draws my eye to the centre of the sig.... its a nice style and a <3 sig