the only problem i see is the lack of an actual focal point. my eyes are drawn to his shoulder.that can't be right lol other than that i like the blending
If the artist is showing off the man's muscles or weapons than drawing to the shoulder is a logical move. In media arts its about getting the MAIN POINT across, so obviously he didnt wanna show off his shoulders, the focal doesn't have to be the person;s face. Yameean?
well i think the black & white one turned out quite nice ,,, the effects are good and the focal is okey but it give me the impression that there isn't so much more then a render so try adding some effects and so to add up to that regards breezer
i like the colors... but like said already... you need to fix the focal from the shoulder to the face like you have stated but its nice