i like the vine concept,but the white circle and glowin green vine thing throw it off.and the render could use a little more blending.nice text tho,and use of color is good as well.
It sticks out in a bad way compared to the rest of the tag, a color balance/light gradient map adjustment layer should fix it.
The render doesn't flow with the sig. It's very chaotic. In terms of Entangled you concept doesn't match the sig at all. I don't actually see anything entangled. I see vines and some abstract, but the snake render doesnt work with it. The lighting doesnt work either. The whie light on him yet no light source at all, and no shine on the vines. The black negativity on the right side is very misleading and is a bit of a turn-off. The text is overdone. The small subtext that is supposed to be unreadable is overpowering the larger text thats supposed to be emphasized more. The underscore uneder the "ed," doesn't work and ruins it. I think 1 or 2 pixels down would be much more fluent.
It has alot of potential, its just that the blank black sides on the left and right are too sudden, it should be a more gradual change from the focal to the sides. Also use some sharpen/blur tools for more depth it looks kinda flat. Good tag though
