For a first, it's actually pretty good. One thing I hate (not anything against you) is when ppl cover the whole tag with the focal. It honestly looks very unappealing to me. Since it's ur first, I'll let it slide >.< Anyways, it seems to have no definite color, and the text is downright dreadful (Most text is in the beginning). Overall, it's good for a first. Just read some tutorials and look at good sigs to inspire you and you'll start making great stuff in no time.
ok thanks for the feedback, for the text tho, this has been one of my big problems, i don't know how to place it or how to add effects to it also when you say "it seems to have no definite color" what do you mean by that? and yah im reading some tutorials and trying to learn as much as i can from them.
