My 1st Render

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  1. jkcimafranca

    jkcimafranca Well-Known Member

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    Comments and Suggestions are really appreciated :tongue:
    I know its not that good yet, but who cares its my first ;)

    And if anyone knows how to remove the orange parts in my render, plz do tell ^_^
     
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    A few tips if you're just starting:

    - I know I say this to people quite a bit, but always preview your renders over white, black, red and blue background to spot those pesky edge pixels.
    - The pen tool and/or polygonal lasso should be your main tool if one isn't already.
    - Black and white renders are great, but sketches and generally the style of this one make them difficult to render.
     
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    oh ok thanks, but i did put it in black nd white bg... not red though
     
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    Well, I'd have preferred a simpler image for a first render, and the quality is bad too.

    As for the cut, I'd say you did alright but plenty of things that need improvement, the outlining for instance.
     
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    any tips in finding good quality renders? gamewallpapers.com needs membership...
     
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    nice cut for your first but: cut the next time a wallpaper or something
     
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    yeah i know, i just looked at it and thought it would be cool to render it so i did, next time ill do a Wallpaper.
     
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    good work dude
     
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    thanks
     
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    for wallpapers (game papers)
    i use

    www.gamewallpapers.ru
    totally free, and no membership

    i hope its ok to post a link.
     
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    everyone starts somewhere. good work on your first, keep at it m8 :D
     
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    thankz unkie
     
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    keep practicing and youll get better which doesnt mean the render is that bad ;)

    just try it with something thats not this hard to do ;)
     
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    nice tried m8
     
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    i appreciate your comments guys, i hope i can finish another one by tomorrow :)
     
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