Illirani's First Sig

Yes i know it sux, i need tuts, but what else?



thx

 

render is badly cut and it does not blend at all with the background at all, a lot of work is needed on the effects. work on the focal of the sig, remove the green smudged part, that green color kills the whole sig, the focal should be the render not the green color.
pretty much everything needs to be worked on

 

Thnx Yea this is like ma 1st or 2nd sig sum like that, thnx for your tips

But i dont see a green part, wheat green part u talking about :S?

 

I think hes talking bout teh green/yellow smudging next to his head.

 

yes i am talking about the greenish part over the right side of the render, near the head

 

needs to have some adj....good start

 

blend render
smudge render to blend
sharpen render
bg other than clouds pls

 

IIght guys thx for all tips,

@ Da_ I dont know how the hell that got there lmao

@Diver- I didnt use cloud, there c4ds in the bg that i smudged and this is how everytin turned out..

 

bumpz...

 

focal is lq
fx looks boring
text needs to improve