Very bland BG. Much too bright IMO. Focal on the left is too dark, can't distinguish any features on it. Text is decent, not best I've seen. Needs more effects and such added into the BG as well as the focals. I'd also show a V2 with the colors of the tag. B/W is getting very old nowadays.
The Darkness is unattractive, and i think the BG is a little do boring. There not much going on in the tag also imo. Also try to stick with "One" focal. Which means pick on of the Daft Punk Char. Its pretty hard to put two focal points in a tag. I agree with holmes, id also like to see the colored tag. B/W is only good if you have great flow and effects, that makes your more focused on the effects and less on color. But usually color is overall better. Hope This Help'ed
