Rate Please.

Well i only been serious with improving for about 1-2 Weeks... i think im doing alright so far..considering 2 weeks ago i didnt even know what renders were LOL.. any recommendations/tuts will be appreciated .. thanks.

p.s. my work is all "Endrance" because im Endrance on mafiacoders and a few other sites.

 

Hey man,
Not too bad. You'll definitely get better with time. Check out the tuts section, there's lots of good ones in there.
Keep workin on it!

 

thanks for comment i will check the tuts out for sure

a new 1

 

Text is disasterous in all of them. Best one if ur first 1 IMO, it's most appealing. Second one is much too bland and looks like it took about 15 minutes. Third one, well, it had too much random stuff TBH. Also over-sharpened. Fourth could have done without the pen tool and also could have done without the c4d usage. The whole right side isn't half bad, but u should have kept that going in the rest of the tag. Last one, too many different colors contrasting each other. Also, the color choice for the tag is very poorly done. Pink for a villian? Not very good. Could have done without whatever it is you did on the right side. Also, the text could be better on all of them. Just keep reading tuts and I'm sure you'll get better as time progresses.

 

thanks for comments ill read some tuts

is this any better?



also what do u mean about the text? what should i do to make the text blend nice?

 

my newest i worked hard on it CNC plz

 

there's nothing i can say that hasnt been said on your first 5. your 2nd Bison one is the best imo,drastically better than the others. did you read a tut before doing it? your last one looks ok,but it still needs a ton of work. your text placement on that one not bad though. also,work on your borders (im not the best with that either,so i usually just do a 1px stroke on the inside on overlay ^_^ simple). keep it up though,practice makes perfect

 

here is my new 1 and no i didn't read a tut for 2nd bison 1 i was just foolin around

 

ok i followed some depth tutorials

feel free to use it to improve it its just a demo and if any 1 wants to mess around with it and show here please do

P.S . ignore the crappy parts this was just a fast practice

 

The bottom left of the tag is actually a very good improvement. Not many effects going on other than that. Bg is bland, and the render is too dark in some areas. Work on filling the whole BG with effects, not just a small portion. Plus, the black bg makes it just look unappealing.

 

here is 1 i made followed a tut but incorporated my own stuff

bleh render could blend better? CNC plz thnx

 

work on backgrounds and color balance layers

 

ok will do im gonna follow another tut

 

follow your heart not the tutorial thats the best way to learn graphics

 

hows this?
this was my own doing no tut or anything rate plz and CNC