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First in a couple of months. C&C is appreciated!

-Rubidox

 

The right side is very bland, also, it's hard to tell what exactly the focal is. I would have worked on distinguishing it more. Good work on the depth. Could have done without the text IMO. Border is brown? Don't like tha at all. Good for first in a couple of months. Keep it up.

 

Borderless version:

 

Thanks! Personally, I like having the right side open. I think it puts more attention on the focal.

-Rubidox

 

Everyone has their own style. I'm glad you've found yours. Btw, V2 is better =P

 

Thank you!

 

Any other comments?

 

Not bad. The colors are a bit pale, and the font could be better.

 

Not a fan of the text. Again not bad for a first in a few months. Focal point could stand out a bit more though.

 

Thank you! Any tips on how I can make the focal point stand out better? I was thinking something along the lines of adding more light (where it is needed) and blurring some of the area directly around the focal.

 

not bad just agree with others text shld be better

 

I did a little more work. Any comments?

 

i like the newest version,tho the border is kinda ugly and thick.nice colors and bg tho ^_^

 

bit to plain on the right side
but nice colours and fx

 

yea overdone on the sharpen.