This was supposed to be for the SOTW. But i still dont have 100 posts so ill just get it rated anyway. Design: /10 Creativity: /10 Style: /10 Overall: /30
First one: Design: 5/10 Creativity: 6/10 Style: 5/10 Overall:16 /30 It just doesn't seem to flow well. Nothing is blended or anything. :/ Second one: Design: 7/10 Creativity: 6/10 Style: 6/10 Overall: 19/30 Keep workin' on it, you'll get better, don't worry!
Vertical- First off, I wanna say that the effects look very well done. Just, there really is no focal, no place that draws my attention instantly. Coloring is done well, but the text could use some major work. Mario- Effects look ------ at best. Text could definitely use work. Work on the placement, and coloring of the text. Make it darker so it doesn't stand out as much. Don't like the c4d use either. It's a bit monotone IMO and could use some work. Keep working.
First one... Design: 5/10 Creativity: 7/10 Style: 5/10 Overall: 17/30 The tag could have used a little more blending, and as for the text, it really brings the overall quality of the tag down. Just get rid of the text. Focal point isn't very evident. Just touch up a few things and this could be a good tag. Second one... Design: 7/10 Creativity: 9/10 Style: 7/10 Overall: 23/30 Again the blending in the tag could use some work, but the overall outcome is a lot better. Also again with the text, it tends to draw focus away from the rest of the tag. Good effects and a nice overall outcome.
i think that makes 29/30 :tongue: first one Design: 7/10 Creativity: 8/10 Style: 7/10 Overall: 22/30 second one Design: 6/10 Creativity: 7/10 Style: 6/10 Overall: 19/30 try to blend in the render some more