Am I color blind? Oh, no, it's just b/w. I would have kept it with color if I were you. Too bright IMO, also needs more effects. Could do without the white box on bottom left and also, work on text. Focal is very LQ and could do without the white dots all around him. Could use some work, but just keep at it.
A tad boring, could use some more visual interest. Its not very creative either. A stock of a dude in a hoody, with a sick set of stairs that would be perfect for skate boarding. The dude doesn't match the background in terms of lighting and detail, and the white box is too basic and trendy. The white spatter brushes could have been used a little more in concept, and the text size, style, and placement is bad. The version without text seems a lot more empty than the one with text.
