Jack Sparrow Template..

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  1. bojaso_om

    bojaso_om Well-Known Member

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    Hi all,,

    New Template,, Captin Jack Sparrow,, With Pirates Flavour :D :P

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    Live Preview,,
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    Cooments :D!!
     
  2. Chakka

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    Its not really a template... there's no navigation, no real reason to go to a website of Jack Sparrow really. I don't get its purpose. Design wise the edges look fake and the background colour doesnt work. Also the render looks like a render, rather than part of the design. Oh and you've spelled Captain wrong. I really don't like being so scathing but this is just not for me.
     
  3. bojaso_om

    bojaso_om Well-Known Member

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    umm why it is not a template does it look like an AVATAR!!!

    & about the links!! have u ever seen the LIVE PREVIEW???!!! I guess not cuz u just comming & wasting ur time saying words that even not a good one!!


    So if u r a designer don't even talk show us ur templates!! ;)


    & for the Captain,, sorry I fixed it,,


    DON'T be mad at my reply,, but it is really made me fool!! u don't even say a good word,, how do u live with that behaviour!!


    thanks anyway :)
     
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    I would comment but, I dont think your taking constructive criticism today..cheers!
     
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    design is plain it dont see a point in the edges, the design is just weird all together
     
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    Listen, I did say I was sorry. I always try to give realistic criticism but nearly always manage to put in some things I like about a template; just read any of my other hundreds of posts here or in Signatures/Large Art if you don't believe me. But that isn't a template. Yes you could code it up and stick it on the web, as you have done (and yes I did view your Live version - the crosshair cursor is frankly annoying and the text is unreadable in parts because of the colour you've chosen but I did see you have created a nav bar and the coding was sound) my point was you asked us to critique a template, not coded words placed on top of one. There is no nav bar on that temp; I could take one of your sigs and give it that level of coding.

    I do apologise for coming over so harsh and I don't like doing so but you came here for C&C and I'm not going to lie; that would be behaviour I cannot live with. If you want to see my temps check out MraChakka on DA although I haven't placed any of my recent work (except one skin) there as I haven't been active for half a year. Or even better go to DA and check out some of the Web Design temps; you obviously have imagination and a knowledge of Photoshop to make that reality so just get an idea of what is out there.
     
  7. Psvertjuh

    Psvertjuh NotYourMonkeyNotYourRobot

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    you gotta take the critics to become better, if you can't do that, dont ask for our comments...

    The site is really plain, the background and the main thingie doesnt matches at all, the text is barely readable, ya might wanna use a darker font.. total picture is just not good imo, try to read alot tutorials, follow them, and ask for critics and comments, and try to learn from those critics in stead of getting angry at them
     
  8. bojaso_om

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    hey guys,, in fact I'm not getting angry at u at all u r my m8s here & i really appreciate what u said,,

    BUT let me tell you the truth a lot of ppl out from here like my designs so that I got paid for my designs,, even my logos,, sigs..etc

    u can check my site


    BUT what i'm seeing here that all of u don't like the way i'm designing lol don't know why,, but it happened :D



    thanks any way & as ppl said Each Person has his Own Style :D ;P



    thanks a lot guys,,, Keep Replying on my work don't skip me :D


    I really appreciated :)
     
  9. .Squid267

    .Squid267 Well-Known Member

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    Dude respect him. He donated to these forums. You are an immature little kid. You can't expect it to be god. Frankly it sucks. There is no nav. In the live Preview you have text for the nav and it looks flat out bad. Just stop.

    If anyone paid you for your designs then they got ripped off. Your way of designing looks like ----. If this is your website. http://www.q8ieng.com/ Then stop designing right now.
     
  10. bojaso_om

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    why i have to stop designing??

    if the whole designers take with ur words a lot of designers will stay useless as others connecting for Chatting & that's all,,


    ur opinion is not the WORLD'S opinion,, I'm so pleased that this is my site :) & if any1 can affect me with his words then shame on me to be a designer,, it is ok to take advices BUT it is not to be hopless & listen to others who TRIES to make u useless :)


    thanks anyway ;)
     
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    .Squid267 Well-Known Member

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    People tried to help you and you just wiped it off.

    You didn't listen to Chakka criticism at all, or even make an attempt to change it.
     
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    bojaso nobody said you're useless, you think everybody is born a design god? Hell no, its just practice practice practice. But we can speed it up with a thing called "criticism", and if you're not able to take it, then there is no need to show of you're templates here. As simple as that

    Also Squid you have no right to talk with him that way. Stop designing right now? Who the heck are you? Show you're work then and i can assure you i can find atleast 20things that are wrong wtih it. So please stop being arogant, im sure you're not a design god either.

    Thanks
     
  13. .Squid267

    .Squid267 Well-Known Member

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    I'll admit I 'll take back stop designing, but whens one waltz in here and not make an effort to at least say "Ok, thanks I try to get to those changes" Instead we get
    Keep replying?I really don't understand what bojaso_om is trying to get at. Get only good comments?

    I never once said I was a better designer. I'll my work ain't great but that why I accept harsh criticism.
    I am just going to drop this now.
     

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