Woah!

lol

 

Bad text, dont like the coloring much, and that effect c4d boters me.

 

Looks nice, but I don't like the colors. :/

 

Thanks guys.

 

seems pretty monotone and empty on some spaces perhaps try using that c4d in another way that shows a bit more, that could to it
or some pentool effects could fit quite well aswell it neeeds more depth and colouring other then that its pretty neat

regards

breezer