It's not that bad, but also not that great also ... :$ text could really use some work, mayb try using a better font, and some better colors Also I would create some better flow in the sig, by letting the C4D go one way, instead of the different directions its going now, I'dd put the render some more to the middle also
ok, thanks for the comments. It's kinda what I thought too, but i just can't make it look like what you said for some reason.
blend render more too much random stuff ogin on in bg...takes away from focal point typo nay nay remove it or make it better sumhow (lol)
