I like it, text could be some better though, it takes away a lot of the focal I think, lightsource is a bit to big imo, colors could be some better also, try to use a few gradient layers on a low opicity and some blendingmode, think that would do the trick
I like it, it has good depth and is sharpened just the right amount. But I'm gunna have to agree with Psvertjuh said about the text and light source.
It is too cluttered. Too much is going on and it is taking away, also the range of colors is throwing me off as well. And like everyone said cut the text.