My First "tag" "banner" Idk X_x

well.. i was bored while GR was down and made this for a friend yeah i know is not good and yes i know i need to read more tutorials and yes i know need smore works so please if you are going to criticize me at leats help me be better

thanks



v2





Downsized

 

i like the effects...but rework or lose the text and downsize the size of your canvas...it is more of a banner in my opinion that a SIG. looks good though, nice work.

 

thanks ill downsize it.. and the txt i think ill loose it

 

great use of c4d man!! Looks real hot

Text is only thing that bugged me, just a bit large imo, ur not bad bro make more stuff

 

thanks, yeha text is my worst problem lol oh well practice makes perfection

 

C4D collaboration looks pretty sweet, a little whacky for my taste though.

But nah, it is great.

 

oh slight dude, just want to point out i think when it was suggested u downsize it was meant to have you crop it, literally just shrink the whole thing, I'm on a slightly large screen right now and i see it looks a bit stretched, shrink it and the quality will probably improve as a whole ^_^

 

um k, will try that later, thanks

 

the downsozed version is HAWT!!! gerat job!!

 

heres my criticism,

open up the millions of tags you've been buying and learn!!!

but srsly, colors really need work the most

 

i open them but is easy for some one with experience to learn faster rather than sum 1 who has not much experience

 

its not bad for a first fo sure, just not feeling the text.

 

2biggg
c4d collab is good
overdone on her fading/blending
typo needs work as said

 

CRopped version FTW, it has better focus, the lighting isnt as dominant.