New Sig's

ok, as most of you know, I am trying to improve my work...so I found a tutorial that I really enjoy as it shows me a lot of great new things. I followed the tutorial for these 2 pieces...what do you all think?

 

the first one looks a little bit too oversharpened

 

i dont like the coloring on the second

 

thanks for the feedback J-G and TheSick....I will work to improve...

 

i really like v1

 

i like the first one it blends good and flows good....but the second the colors don't look very good to me...if you have trouble making colors blend (like me) you can google a color scheme maker to helo you...but like i said eairler the first one looks fine

 

As others have said, the first looks over sharpened, and I think the crysis render in the second one doesn't fit with the colors.

You're getting better though! Keep it up!

 

thank you a lot for the feedback Wamm, Poot and Snowy. I will do another one tomorrow to see if I can improve....thanks again!

 

love the first one m8, mind if you share the tut with us ? or just pm it to me ? Ty

GJ !