Choose something other than a rapper. Use something more random. Rappers, unless they are like underground and rarely overly used/w h o r e d, then try some other venues to gain your stocks from... Just some advice.
Yeah, the rapper doesn't fit in the background. Text doesn't fit, and not much done in the background.
render was completely thrown ontop of a another render seems like no work was done to blend what so ever color doesnt even flow typo was thrown in there thats my 2 cents.
