C A T A C L Y S M-sprite Tag

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Defbest, Feb 3, 2008.

  1. Feb 3, 2008 at 7:15 PM #1
    Defbest

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    CnC please!
     
  2. Feb 3, 2008 at 7:21 PM #2
    Dreamery

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    The sprite and background seem to be very apart and the composition feels off to me personally.
     
  3. Feb 3, 2008 at 7:53 PM #3
    Defbest

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    What do you mean by composition?
     
  4. Feb 3, 2008 at 8:04 PM #4
    Dreamery

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    I personally think that it's everything is placed way too much to the left and how there is this one random wireframe on the right.
     
  5. Feb 3, 2008 at 8:41 PM #5
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    Too much sprite fx on the left, and not enough fx on the right. Also try blending the sprite in a little more and giving it more flow. If you can get the flow right you wont really need to blend it in, it'll just look like it's supposed to be there.
     
  6. Feb 4, 2008 at 8:21 AM #6
    diverseartist

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    lose the border

    lose so many colors
    you have every color on the damn color chart (or w/e lol)
     
  7. Feb 4, 2008 at 8:29 AM #7
    Defbest

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    Ok thanks ill work on it some more.
     

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