Djumal

my newest, freshly out of PS


comments please

 

really intresting stuff. love it

 

thanks ^^

 

Very interesting indeed, could maybe use abit more depth.

 

Cool abstract

unique and good lighting, great depth, nice colors

The text needs to be fixed, but not taken out cuz I thought it adds to the flow for what ever reason. Try another font, and a change in the color tone.

Nice one ^_^

 

great tag love the colors

 

I personally don't like the font you chose, but great abstract with nice coloring.

 

Text is too covered. When you try to cover text like that to give it that 3D, effect, it doesn't work if we can't read the text. In one of my sigs I covered the first letter of the text, that way it still had the visibility but was still covered. Take a look below, but still a great tag. 8/10

 

ok thanks for the comments
and I'll think about the text, may fix it
but I like it this way

 

looks smexy

 

I like the colors GJ ^^

 

i hate the text

 

make typo white may?
its cool some parts over sharpen though

 

ok thanks for the comments guys