Rollo Dancer

its the first time ive tried this style. also first in a while. cnc welcome.

 

Pretty sweet but the text robs the focul of
it's punch imo.
Love the effects on the sides. Pen tooling is rad as well.
Colors rock and I like the perspective. ^_^ Maybe just sharpen her a tad
more to match the text.

Very nice mate.
Very nice.

 

text needs a little adjusting and more effects need to be added to the girl

 

sharpen not feelin the typo
typo really make it wierd but i like the soft feel to it kinda flowy...
8/10

 

Text high-jacks the flow, focal, and ruins the lighting, and even the composition. The girl doesn't stand out enough either, and the background is kinda boring.

 

thanks for your feedback
any more?