First Ever Realism

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Fallen, Jan 27, 2008.

  1. Fallen

    Fallen Senior Member

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    Alright, I decided that I was going to try a realism sig. I'll tell you know, I do realize that its not really a realism. I was testing and experimenting on different effects and how to alter/combine things.

    I went into it with this:
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    I tried to bring down his age, and turn it into a more red sig instead of green:
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    Really need C&C please.
     
  2. phusef

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    hmm no offense but it looks like you ddint do much at all and the bg and the render needs blending, the text could also use some work
     
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    +1
     
  4. Fallen

    Fallen Senior Member

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    .. Did you read any of the stuff?... like, at all?...
     
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    I dunno..Looks weird having a dude singing into a microphone in the sky.
     
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    yes i did
    it still seems like you didnt do much
    you said you brought his age down...but he looks exactly the same
    the green>red is relatively simple brush over green parts with color you desire and adjust layer
    the smudging isnt that great and the blending leaves much to be desired
    just being honest
     
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    Here's my advice, but im sorry to say it may involve scrapping the current -.-

    from what it seems were calling realism now, a guy in the clouds with a red glow on him wouldn't rly count as realism ;)

    I suggest making something with more of the guys body, like mic, guitar, all of it. then work in a stock of someplace he might be. like a club with some people in the bg. then the hard part is making it look like he's part of the picture, then adding good depth to make the focal clear :] I'm just kinda brainstorming outloud for ya here though, i'd say as it is right now its an ok tag, but that it wouldn't fall under the definition of realism ^_^;;
     
  8. Fallen

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    That is fine. I didn't really like it anyways, again,

    but yeh. I really do appereciate the comment and suggestion. those are the kind of things i'm looking for. :D thanks again.
     
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    glad to help, its always nice to know people appreciate it :)
     
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    pretty random just a dude with clouds, needs a bit more depth and maybe a better execution
     

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