Its my opinion that the bright outer glow on the objects is a little too much. But thats because I like the render to blend. Looks really good for your first, bright future ahead of you.
Lmao!!, not at your siggy, but the fact that I almost used that exact same render today, in fact i started but changed my mind cause of his pose.... heres the render... http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh70/ph...y/son473490.png