Perfect Plan

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by V, Jan 23, 2008.

  1. V

    V Well-Known Member

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    so i know the size of render compared to the statue are horrid and alot of flaws are there but anyways cnc.
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  2. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    very nice smudging
     
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    hehe, i think it all looks pretty good composition wise, but like u mentinoed i think it'd be nicer if the render wasnt the size of statue of liberty's head ^_^;; nice city sketch in the bg, the only other thing to point out is the lighting, the light source (sun?) appears to be behind the render, but the lighting on the statue of liberty seems unnaffected by this, maybe i'm just misunderstanding where the source is though sorry -.-
     
  4. V

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    ^^ yee the lighting is off. ill probably auction this off as im not too happy with it .
     
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    love it manahan i think the bg could use some more excitement but composition is GREAT!
     
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    Maybe if you redid it as an LP, it will make up for the size of him compared to her head.
     
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    I like the text, and the white building effects. Good smudging as well. Lighting is off though. Lol, just noticed the sniper on the statue. Maybe make the render smaller for a more realistic look. I like the way you did the shadow of the render.
     
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    im sure it'll auction well, its a good tag its just little details ^_^
     
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    really nice i love the idea but the luighting on the right side looks of, that spot so maybe jus change that or sumthing i dont knw how to fix it lol.The text looks great and eveyrhting is in its place sorta thing sogood work.
     
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    The idea behind this is great.. keep up the good work :)
     
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    You have some proportion problems but I like the concept. Looks pretty good, it would make a awesome LP.
     
  12. V

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    sotw version [​IMG]
     

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