Timeshift

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  1. Jan 23, 2008 at 4:39 PM #1
    Chris*

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    V1
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    V2
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    CnC, please. :]
     
  2. Jan 23, 2008 at 4:41 PM #2
    Hino

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    i like v1 but im not sure what the render is
     
  3. Jan 23, 2008 at 5:22 PM #3
    Daecu

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    i like v1 alot, just add some lighting and itll be great ^_^
     
  4. Jan 23, 2008 at 6:31 PM #4
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    looks great but i think it needs a bit more blending and smoothing out
     
  5. Jan 23, 2008 at 7:38 PM #5
    boobsmagee

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    ya it could use a few touchups but it looks pretty cool man
    nice work
     
  6. Jan 23, 2008 at 7:39 PM #6
    PhanE

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    nice depth.
     
  7. Jan 23, 2008 at 9:33 PM #7
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    Very nice, could be darkened imo
     
  8. Jan 23, 2008 at 9:37 PM #8
    Street-famouS

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    The effects are not bad, but I'm not a fan of the composition, also, you should blur the bg a littl, atm the focal doesn't seem distanced enough from it.
     
  9. Jan 23, 2008 at 10:15 PM #9
    VinnyG

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    I like the first one, but I think there should be more in the background.
     
  10. Jan 23, 2008 at 10:24 PM #10
    Marthmaster92

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    it all looks good to me! good job!
     
  11. Jan 24, 2008 at 4:06 AM #11
    Mortified Penguin

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    Timeshift, my brother. Tom Swift the protagonist.

    Nice depth and effects. Is that a hint of realism I detect? Lovely how the render isn't centered...don't see that as often anymore.
     
  12. Jan 24, 2008 at 4:08 AM #12
    Jackal's Baby

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    i love it!!! great work!!!
    the effects are amazing!!!
    =^.^=
     
  13. Jan 24, 2008 at 9:23 AM #13
    Chris*

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    Thanks for the comments, all. ^_^
     
  14. Jan 24, 2008 at 10:06 AM #14
    .Immortal

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    Not bad man, just keep the effects clean.
    Also colours and depth look fine, maybe work on compo and lighting.
    Like I said, g'night :P
     

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