Pretty nice job. The white is a bit overpowering, and I'm not a big fan of text. Other than that, I like it.
I was worried i would be assaulted by some god aweful noob work in need of much critiscism... Thankfully unfounded. Very very sexy mate.
Thanks all I just got back to GFX and ive always sucked with text anyway thanks for positive feedback HEY NASUUL REMMEMBER ME FROM RSC??!!!
agree with above comments, try text smaller and kinda off the renders right aide a bit (low, but not close to the bottom, but not in the middle ) good tag ^_^