made another one.. just trying out something. personal opinion please Since I suck at text, I tried to hide it as good as possible...
hmm looks like your new to gfx, try and make your render stand out more from the bg, also try and make your text fit in more, read some tuts and am sure you will get better
it looks liek you've covered your render a bit much with your effects, you should always try to keep the main part of it clear imo ^_^ tuts will give you some good idea's for effects and compo, text isnt bad imo, dont try to hide it, make it blend. if you really want your text to look good look up some new fonts asides from the defaults. they get boring because everyone's seen em all Dafont is a good site, i've gotten alot of nice ones from there. but yea, if you dont think text looks good, dont use it. its ok to not have it in at all, sometimes it just doesnt work but if you are going to include it I think you should have it stand out enough to be seen, but blend in enough to not over power the render. Hope this helps in the future ^_^
not bad but i think mayb make the sig a lil smaller it would look alot better also the render could be lil smaller and sharpen it.It looks a little lightish so if u sharpen it, that should be fixed by that.Also the white stuff the line thingy maybe bblend that in or sumthing, The text placement should be impvoed and move it near the guy...not bad good try.
