Heroes.

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Mortified Penguin, Jan 22, 2008.

  1. Mortified Penguin

    Mortified Penguin Senior Member

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    It is supposed to be really simple with all the empty space. I didn't know whether to add borders or not so I did and you guys will tell me what's up. Plus this is the first tag where I have learnt to use the pentool like this. My original pentool line was much more awesome but I accidentally did the dots on the same layer without noticing and changed the blending mode too many times to go back so this is what I have got.
     
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    The white hurts my eyes a little :lol:
    Maybe a darker colored background instead? That would also bring out the yellow dots. ^_^

    I like this one better than your others. :)
     
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    Thanks. Since the original picture had a white background and it suited, I figured why not keep it?
     
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    yeah it suits.
    but the black pentool line doesn't. or you would have to continue the line some more.
    and not letting it stop in front of her head at the top.
    imo. the black line just doesn't fit. some brighter color would be better.
     
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    What do you mean stop in front of her head? It goes past her head up the the top right where it can't be seen because the tag isn't bigger...

    I thought it added a nice touch but that's just my opinion, lol.

    Thanks for the comment though.
     
  6. joeytheking23

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    I saw this in your sig and loved it. The simplicity of the sig is great, the render fits perfectly here for the style/feel of the sig. Good job, I thought it was a built-in halo over her head at first :P
     
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    I like the simplicity, but it's too simple mate haha.

    Black & Yellow aren't suiting the white BG
     
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    love it dude but try a dark background
     
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    love it dude but try a dark background
     
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    sorry not liking this one too simple all you done was add a stock, text and a line using the pen tool.
     
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    Hey simplicity aint a bad thing; personally I love this tag, have done since I first saw it. Looks well blended, lighting all works, the pen tool work is pretty good and just adds a little something. The only thing I would say is the text for Hayden isnt quite right for me, but at the same time i cant think of any way to make it better lol.
     
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    i think it would look equally nice on a background with some more activity, but that its totally up to you, looks nice as it is bro ^_^
     
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    nice but i dont likw the pn tool thing over her head i looks messed up...round her is okay but over her head looks messed up. oTHER then that its simple and looks nice.
     
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    I like the simplicity, but add something to the bg. It just doesnt look good plain white.
     
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    idk what the stock looked like, but it doesn't look like you did much, im sorry
    but its too simple, just as others have stated
    despite the pentool line being kinda cool, it really just doesn't fit to me,
    she'd look better on her own
    but then would there be anything done by you other than text?
    if you changed colors up, and made the bg entirely white on your own, nice work
    i do like the simplicity

    but if not mate :/
     

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