Dreams...

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  1. USSilentSniper

    USSilentSniper Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">Been busy lately so havent really made much, but anyway.
    My latest, all filters (i think that's my new thing).
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    And a poem, osrt of, it's really more like a song but w/e.
    We have witnessed the fall
    Watched as the world decays
    The prophecy is not clear

    We watch through shallow dreams
    As we fall to the dark, bearing all that is wrong
    We dream of sin


    Witness as the world falls
    As we continue to putrefy the society
    The scum of the earth are now the glorified
    We raise the wrong on pedestals
    As they turn us to sin, and death
    Correct it now or die

    We watch through shallow dreams
    As we fall to the dark, bearing all that is wrong
    We dream of sin


    We lost our minds, lost our souls
    Trying to change, for the wrong reasons
    We bleed to find it, but have found it
    As it stares us in the face

    We watch through shallow dreams
    As we fall to the dark, bearing all that is wrong
    We dream of sin

    Bleeding.
    Dreams - Trent</div>
     
  2. solakaboy

    solakaboy Well-Known Member

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    Very nice, the background affect that was used looks HAWT. The text i think it a little over glowed and nice colors used aswell good work ^_^
    Good poem aswell, emo... :P
    JOKES HAR HAR
     
  3. J-G

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    dont rly like the little pixelated type effect in the middle but the rest is good
     
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    ehhhhh there is no reason this should look good but it does :) weird lighting/colors, no depth, no stock image (which i prefer), but i still like it, good job, just change the text :)
     
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    pretty cool abstract, i think it could be better if you took off the text covering it up or moved it someplace else
     
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    cool abstract m8 ;)
     
  7. joeytheking23

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    Wow, I love this. The green squares may be a little overpowering, but I love the effects. Great job man.
     
  8. USSilentSniper

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    Thanks all, i think the green may be a tad much as someone said.
    Appreciate all the comments.
     
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    ive seen alot betterfrom you. looks very... beginnerish ? but i stil like it a liddle.
     
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    nice idea the text is okay but kinda hard to read though,I love the orange side really nice effect the green is cool but i think is a bit dull on that side..overall good stuff
     
  11. thesickness89

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    im not feeling the text
     

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