It's nice, but abit too monotone for my taste. And try bringing out the focal abit better. Right now I'm focused on the c4d in front of the gas mask guy.
Nice, it looks great! Though, if you maybe added some upwards flow with the text somehow, it would make the tag that much more amazing. Other than that, great job, I love the effects!
the words need to stand out a bit more...make the spaces blend to a black or near black color... otherwise me likes