A lottttt of empty space bro, makes it look too bland. The text could use better work and effects there, good blending , but it needs more flow to it & FX
Imo....everything seems good though I'd just say lower the opacity of the mirrored text...and set a lower flow for the eraser and soft erase a bit...lol just a suggestion... nice work...sometimes its good to keep things simple B)
wayyyyy too empty, i do however like the effects you have on the render, they look pretty cool but their not helping the option flow as much as they could cause the background doesnt enforce it.
hmmm...maybe if you cut down on the size of the thing it might help get rid of the emptiness...i can see it looking good cut down to the solid white lines...like it says me