no its a good warmup keep sigging and iam sure you can get your groove back i likes vs1 bg looks a little empty though
it's nice, i would sharpen,dodge, and burn it to give it more depth and the light source looks like it's bursting though his body. but other wise I like the flow and the fx kinda wrapping around him.
i like the updated version better because it fills out the sig more i'd also say move your name off of ironman
i like some aspects of it but some kills it first Text needs to go. and it needs moar and moar bg effects or something