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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Chakka, Jan 20, 2008.

  1. Chakka

    Chakka Well-Known Member

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    Rate my current sig please. Made using pen tool and custom smudging. Quite like the outcome but C&C more than welcome. My styles are very rarely universally liked lol so it'll be interesting to see what people think :)

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    i like the smooth feeling to it but the random pixels (smudge?) completely ruin that. the pen tool is very well done but still it just doesnt flow or take up enough space. the waves are going against each other? colors are good i suppose.

    just try to fill it all a bit more. (more effects). and also work on the flow. and remove the random pixels
     
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    I see it as being potentially a lot better, theres a lot of empty space and the little dot FXs are oversharpened.
     
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    The dots are there via Diffuse layers. I might try and blur them out a bit, am in two minds over whether I like them or not...

    As for the waves, I designed it as a kind of "backwash meets new wave" with a further wave cresting onto a shore...lol
    I'm also beginning to feel the pen tool is lost a bit. Ah well, I might do some more work on this tomorrow then.

    Thanks for the C&C :)
     
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    looks good the little pixels on it kinda throw it off for me
     
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    Thanks for C&C. I think those pixels have to go then xD
     
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    chakka like it cause i like you and if i like you i want you...
    that being said the dots do ruin the smoothness imo (on the big wave on the left side) the right side it looks like the water spraying out which is cool imo.
     
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    I like the pen-tooling.

    Perhaps make an orange blob to make it

    look like a water-color-painting and put in a orange

    circle for sun. Anyways it looks rly secksy :)
     
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    looks cool, could use a bit more fx though
     
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    i like it but too many pixel stars on it, makes it look like dead pixels in the sig.
     
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    Thanks for all the C&C :)
     

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