the bg is too clustered and busy imo and sometimes you can do that but i dont think it worked very well in this situation the color scheme looks good and theres real potential in this sig but i just odnt like it that much atm
i dont like the c4d affects coz they dont flow and alos the lines on the right go with the flow.So maybe work on the flow and depth of the sig. It needs work, so jus play around with some adj layers would look alot better.