Sprite Irl

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by bime*, Jan 19, 2008.

  1. bime*

    bime* Well-Known Member

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    First tag I've ever made using a sprite.. I think I did ok.. I'd seen something similar and found the stock in a pack I downloaded. And I thought what the hell I'll give it a try, here's what I came up with. :)

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    CnC is appreciated

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    Sharpened the focal, and blurred the bottom right.

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    the smudge coming out of the ground is a little oversharpened. Nice effects though, i like how you incorporated it into a downtown street scene
     
  3. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    great fx depth and text, what i don't like is the focal on the sprite. its not clear enough.
     
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    good work!
     
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    Sharpen the pic a little bit more or blur the fx on the bottom near the sprite and it'll be great.

    I like it, very nice.
     
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    take off the overlay border, sharpen it a bit and its good. a suggestion maybe, for lighting try to incorporate traffic lights or something...hmmm actually that gaves me an idea aha imma try that now with a sig
     
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    Thanks for the comments guys, took your advice and uploaded a second version..

    Current?
     
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    There you go much better to look at for the eyes.
     
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    The sprite is too small,and it doesn't really go with the stock imo.
     
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    bime* Well-Known Member

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    That's the point :)
     
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    looks pretty cool
    but i think you overdid the green smudge a bit though
     
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    its good but the proportions are weird imho...
    also the text placemnt is bad.
     
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    It's Tree's
     
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    I think that it looks good and was an interesting sig to make, its a unique sprite sig imo, but thats just me.
     
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    Thanks again guy's :)
     

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