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new one; comments?

 

Effect on left dominates too much. great text.

 

thanks ill see what i can do with the effect on left

 

Yer effect of the left kind of dominates it all... but i love the text and colors good job *thumbs up*

 

Nice text. like how its centered.

 

i dont really like the eye thing or the perfect circle
i think the eye should only be applied to the cornea and not the whole eye region itself
and i think you should make that cirlce complete like hide it behind the render or make it into a line but the circle seems to clash with the flow imo

 

The ring is wayy to powerful. Maybe a bit less strength to it, overpowers the render as a main focus.

 

lose the ring on his face.