Yeah i believe the only thing thats wrong is text. I cant give you an exact text but maybe a cursive one? or one that kinda reminds you of that dead guy in your sig. something like that
i think the text and the light should both be toned down in brightness a bit the colors work very well with each other and the effects are pretty cool good sig
good stuff the text doesnt look completely out stuck on, it actually works with the sig instead of fighting it now looks good imo keep up the good work