Let This Battle Commence!

This is my newest piece.. CnC appreciated

 

for me the focal is too blurred, also the background is a bit monotone, it needs more effects. and the green behind the text is another no for me.

 

Thanks for your comments

 

I disagree on it needing more effects.
I think it has some potential, but you need to sharpen
the focul and change the text to something more
fresh and not so artsy. Also, the green on his
face is no good, if you can erase it, I would
recommend doin' it.

Still,
not a bad start just tweak it a bit.