Cloud

i was jusst messing around try to get a certain look, but it looks like a whored style =/

 

It's a bit messy imo. I don't think the focal is defined very clearly in this case.

 

Focal really needs to stand out more.

 

not bad but its a lil messy and also i think it lacks a lot of depth. like the c4d looks out of place and u could have added some adj layers soo it would loook much better.

 

Its ok not good or bad

 

like the effects but cloud looks a little streched out to me and its a little messy

 

Composition's a tad off, and too bright.
But you didn't do too bad mate. That's
a hard render to make "work" if you know what
I'm saying.

Just the effects seem a bit random and it's killin
the flow bad.

Although, it's still got potential. Just work on making
that focul pound some ground and it could turn into a
very, very nice piece. Maybe try some burning and sharpening.