Yet Another One

It needs more depth, the left side looks sharp.

But nice colouring.

 

thank u for ur comments i will try improving it.

 

Actually, I think the coloring could be improved. It just doesn't fit the focal's "theme" lol

But besides the really sharpened part (or wierd effect) and the left side, its pretty nice.

 

thanks for the comments, any idea how to impove the colourng like what should i add?

 

i think u should up size your sigs length wise.