Heh, Definitely bright. ^_^ Little too much though. I like the idea, except the render's a little too blended in i think. The effects are pretty nice, especially in the upper left. The focul is your main hitch there bro. Try to keep your focul's standing out.
WOW thats bright looks good but all that light really takes focus off the original focal but gj on the sig
good concept....minaor adj on the background to tone down the brightness...maybe try a V2 and let us see the difference? good work!!