Venom

It's my second sprite, CnC please.

 

looks ok...do you have a color version to compare (color is better in my opinion)

 

No, I didn't save a colour version. :/

 

Personally, I think that the focal is way to hard to see, and is hard to define with all of the action going all around it. Just slow down all of that other stuff and it'll look great!

 

u cant really see the sprite so maybe increse the size or sumthing so it actually can see it, the c4d is way to like the main thign coz of the colour an its kidna bright.