New One

your main render is way to dark and blurred besides that it good

 

i didnt blur the render...

 

All looks good but the lighting by his head could be better. I'm personally against soft brushing lighting. It makes it look forced and unnatural. Dodge tool ftw xD

 

BG looks a bit lq

The lighting could be better like CI said

The purple and green colors clashing is a bit unnatural

Still, I really like this tag :]

 

Strange sig. The colors doesn't fit greatly with each other and the render is too dark. Exept this its a nice tag.

 

yeh this one seems right for the recycle bin

 

ya i think all you need to do is fix the lightning, i like the concept though