i really like it, only thing is the text is hard to read, either that or my eyesight is going, good job ^_^
Smudging is way too flat. Try to use some higher strength smudging. Also, it's all one colour, so it looks rather dull. Try using high contrast C4D on normal settings and smudging those. that way you get a nice balance of lights and darks, and different colours.
its pretty cool the only thing i would recommend is smudging in that bottom part cause it looks like it came to a clean cut stop
Good tag. The smudging is simple but it creates a nice effect. I also like the pixel dust you maded. The only bad things are the light lines who are pixelised and the text who is hard to read.
