not ba dlighting seems to be in the wrong place and its a lil strong, the c4d on the left not eally liig it b=maybe jus blur it a lil the other effects on the right and clipping mask looks good.Text isnt bad either...good job.
Wow....very good work man.... I agree the lighting may* be in the wrong place....but regardless I still like it... the effects on the right look really sick!