not bad , i like the text it looks real cool, the effects near him are good and i think u could jus add few more it would look even better.The lighting on the left side of the head looks messed up for some reason, so maybe u should jus darken some areas maybe.Overall i really like it nice work.
yeh i think that looks a lot better but sorry i 4got to mention the left side looks lil empty but i think it would look better like this rather then adding something in.However i guess if u moved the guy in the middle but cool stuff.
lighting is off, its hitting him in the left, and its coming from the right (from our perspective) also move him over a tad.
Looks good, but maybe change the light source so it is more coming at him and not so down like that, more of at an angle.
