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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by inverse, Jan 7, 2008.

  1. MDproskater

    MDproskater Well-Known Member

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    More or less. But what I meant was that what he/she said sumed up what I had to say.

    But either way, it's a really nice tag.
     
  2. ikky

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    I think a thinner size would have really set it off, if you removed the bottom up too the tips of his hair that would have created better focal dominance atm for me its hard to see what it is if i didn't know it was sasukas fas i woulnt have been able to tell you at all.

    Still nice good txt IMO.
     
  3. Nemesis37

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    I agree!
     
  4. inverse

    inverse Banned from GR

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    I can't figure out this statement at all. Some people have said it's overblended, but it's not. Also, if i removed the bottom up to the tips of his hair i'd be cutting out about 80% of the tag,... not good.
     
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    imho your current is way better
    this is good but it has alot of flaws
    -lacks focal
    -too busy
    -needs a bit better text placement
    -oversmudged
     
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    I actually love what you've done with the tag. Nice work.
     
  7. ikky

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    Why not? atm there is far too much going on and there is excessive blending it really kills the focus and i find my eye drawn to the smudge blend more the the face.
     
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    If I unblended it, though, it'd lose depth and perspective. You can't have everything perfect in a tag, you know.
     
  9. xX Kr3W Boy

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    This is relly nice good job.
     
  10. ikky

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    Dude im giving you my thoughts, you asked for it when you posted in this forum.

    And you can remove it without losing depth, build the depth in more away from the focus its that simple, use majority of the layers around and not ontop of the piece.
     
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    Yeah, but I can't. What I was saying was that if I remove the layers on top of the render it'll throw off the balance with the left side. I'll have to completely re-hash the left side with the dodge/burn tool and it'll turn out flat.
     
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    Lovin' the colours and text
     
  13. ikky

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    Okay i didnt see that.

    prehpas just not it for the next one then?
     
  14. InvaderMoose

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    Nice, what font is that?
     
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    work on text
     

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