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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Superveire, Jan 7, 2008.

  1. Superveire

    Superveire Well-Known Member

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    I should probably study but I just wanted to make a sig once again.
    Now don't be too harsh, it's been a very long time since I made one :P
    Anyway, I made the first one with a tut on my pc wich has a crt monitor. And once I got on my notebook, wich has a tft offcourse, I was surprised to find out it looked like bull----.
    Thought I'd post it anyway:
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    The second one I made on my own. I don't like the color and find it a bit monotoned.
    I sorta don't like the shade of my text either.
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    Black & white version:
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    C&C welcome
     
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    yeah studying probably would have been better use of your time.
     
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    I'd appreciate it if you want to comment, but if you do, make sure it's constructive.
     
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    they look ok, keep experimenting and try your own style and try to keep the text a little less visible.

    so study :tongue:
     
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    top is nice but i think the effects could have ben lot smoother coz they start stick out or so maybe ifu blur some bits it may help but im not to sure about that. The text is good though i like the way u did it.

    2.this is cool to i like the lighting aswell but i think it could be jus a bit stronger maybe and make it at the top or sumthing so u can see the render and theres more focus on it sorta, also the text is strange in this.Word of advice dont ever put text in 2 different places like that.The text on the left is just great but on the left corner looks odd.

    3.this version looks even better nice stuff.
     
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    For the first one, the lighting is off since the lighting is on his hands, but I think it's suppose to be on the left side... Anyways, the effect in the backgoround is pretty good, but there needs to be seomthing more with perhaps putting something above the render to make it flow because there really isn't any flow right now. OH and you spelled getsuga tenshou wrong. Take out the h

    I prefer the one with some color because it just seems to emphasize the brightness more and I guess I like the contrast a bit more >_>
     
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    Thx all.
    I added a bit more light on james' head. And I removed the metallica text.
    @superscience: Do you mean I should put the light left above the render?

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    Changed the bleach one as well. Changed the light source and adjusted the c4d's.
    As for the text, when I type getsuga in google it automaticly matches with getsuga tenshou
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    Ya. Thats basically what I was trying to say about the lighting. Like it better now ^^
    You spelled it Getsuga Thenshou when it's suppose to be getsuga tenshou
     
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    Wow, never saw that. Probably a typo. Thx for telling ;)
    More c&c welcome
     
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    Fixed text:
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    The render is a bit small in 2, and the lighting is weird
     
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    What's weird about the lighting? And yeah, I don't like the fact that the render is that small either. But else it wouldn't have the elements of it that I defenitly wanted on the sig.
     
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    Pretty nice, I was actually searching the forum for metallica, and found this. Nice one veire.
     
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    Thx.
    C&C still welcome.
     

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