not bad i think the render could b a lil smaller maybe and the c4d ither take it out or maybe blend it in coz it dont flow with ur tag to be honest. The text is rreallybad maybe make it a bit bigger and different colour and diferent placement aswell.
i suppose ure talking avout the c4d on the left side the problem is if i take it away it leaves an empty feeling but thanx for the cnc
V2 is better, but the sides dont fit together and neither fit that well with the render, but the elft side does a bit.